what is it about the moon that
both wake and slumber seek
where glistening leaves
and shaded trees meet?
lunar sings a song
with low tones and
heightened peaks
cerulean frosted symphony
rooted branches lean to listen
while the world pretends to sleep
nature beckons sweetly
through chirping and scampered feet
where lovers embrace in the
heat of night ~
soft kisses, firm promises
entwined each other tight
shall we dance for you
as our bodies reach
and our minds free
in your gracious, shimmering light?
unveil me
slowly
my moon
my knight
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writinginrain said,
February 20, 2010 at 7:15 pm
Love It! Well Done.
jemfyr said,
February 21, 2010 at 5:11 pm
Thanks so much for visiting my blog and comment on “Ode to Moon”!!
Priyanka said,
February 20, 2010 at 7:39 pm
Superb!!
jemfyr said,
February 21, 2010 at 5:12 pm
Thanks so much for visiting my blog and comment on “Ode to Moon”!!
kihupotru said,
February 20, 2010 at 7:43 pm
~sis,
)
like knife that slowly cut the pillow..and my head go deep inside my dreams
Semaphore said,
February 21, 2010 at 12:14 am
Lyrical, like the words to a love song, this evokes springtime and warmth and the innocence of youth. Ah to relive that time again.
LunaJune said,
February 21, 2010 at 12:59 am
the pull
the push
the lift and the trust
that even when it is not seen
it’s magnetic being
it still around us
effecting and affecting
the tides in each of us
beautiful my friend
Odes to the Lunar light
that shines to us all
Challon said,
February 21, 2010 at 1:16 am
Hello my twitter friend…this is BEAUTIFUL!
jemfyr said,
February 21, 2010 at 5:13 pm
Thank you for visiting my blog! Really appreciate your comment on ‘Ode to Moon’ =)
jeoffrycat said,
February 21, 2010 at 3:02 am
Very erotic and ephereal. The push and pull of love.
jemfyr said,
February 21, 2010 at 5:14 pm
Thank you so much for visiting my bog! Appreciate your comment on ‘Ode to Moon’…. happy you enjoyed it!
Gene Bowker said,
February 22, 2010 at 9:19 pm
Wow.. very nice as always!
jemfyr said,
February 23, 2010 at 4:11 am
Thanks so much! I appreciate it =)
dustus said,
March 1, 2010 at 8:52 pm
Great flow
A wonderful ode
neerja tiwari said,
March 2, 2010 at 5:48 am
a gem from a jem
as oft i have said
the ode to the moon
words of the soul
the pull of the moon
and the lovers entwined
create a magic
blissful sublime!
in short : well written and ending magnificient
Dani H said,
March 11, 2010 at 7:39 pm
Lovely, lovely! Please post more soon.
crawtx said,
March 15, 2010 at 9:44 pm
Very good! Such talent!