Ode to Moon

what is it about the moon that
both wake and slumber seek
where glistening leaves
and shaded trees meet?

lunar sings a song
with low tones and
heightened peaks
cerulean frosted symphony

rooted branches lean to listen
while the world pretends to sleep
nature beckons sweetly
through chirping and scampered feet

where lovers embrace in the
heat of night ~
soft kisses, firm promises
entwined each other tight

shall we dance for you
as our bodies reach
and our minds free
in your gracious, shimmering light?

unveil me
slowly
my moon
my knight

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17 Comments

  1. writinginrain said,

    February 20, 2010 at 7:15 pm

    Love It! Well Done.

    • jemfyr said,

      February 21, 2010 at 5:11 pm

      Thanks so much for visiting my blog and comment on “Ode to Moon”!!

  2. Priyanka said,

    February 20, 2010 at 7:39 pm

    Superb!!

    • jemfyr said,

      February 21, 2010 at 5:12 pm

      Thanks so much for visiting my blog and comment on “Ode to Moon”!!

  3. kihupotru said,

    February 20, 2010 at 7:43 pm

    ~sis,
    like knife that slowly cut the pillow..and my head go deep inside my dreams :))

  4. Semaphore said,

    February 21, 2010 at 12:14 am

    Lyrical, like the words to a love song, this evokes springtime and warmth and the innocence of youth. Ah to relive that time again.

  5. LunaJune said,

    February 21, 2010 at 12:59 am

    the pull
    the push
    the lift and the trust
    that even when it is not seen
    it’s magnetic being
    it still around us
    effecting and affecting
    the tides in each of us

    beautiful my friend
    Odes to the Lunar light
    that shines to us all

  6. Challon said,

    February 21, 2010 at 1:16 am

    Hello my twitter friend…this is BEAUTIFUL!

    • jemfyr said,

      February 21, 2010 at 5:13 pm

      Thank you for visiting my blog! Really appreciate your comment on ‘Ode to Moon’ =)

  7. jeoffrycat said,

    February 21, 2010 at 3:02 am

    Very erotic and ephereal. The push and pull of love.

    • jemfyr said,

      February 21, 2010 at 5:14 pm

      Thank you so much for visiting my bog! Appreciate your comment on ‘Ode to Moon’…. happy you enjoyed it!

  8. Gene Bowker said,

    February 22, 2010 at 9:19 pm

    Wow.. very nice as always!

    • jemfyr said,

      February 23, 2010 at 4:11 am

      Thanks so much! I appreciate it =)

  9. dustus said,

    March 1, 2010 at 8:52 pm

    Great flow
    A wonderful ode

  10. neerja tiwari said,

    March 2, 2010 at 5:48 am

    a gem from a jem
    as oft i have said
    the ode to the moon
    words of the soul
    the pull of the moon
    and the lovers entwined
    create a magic
    blissful sublime!

    in short : well written and ending magnificient

  11. Dani H said,

    March 11, 2010 at 7:39 pm

    Lovely, lovely! Please post more soon.

  12. crawtx said,

    March 15, 2010 at 9:44 pm

    Very good! Such talent!


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